Lisa AICE Media Studies Film

This is my final submission. I revised some minor audio issues and cut out some awkward pauses that sometimes occurred. I also removed the clip showing what the note said. The note said "Dear Colten, I still love you. Love, Mia." I decided to keep this out because I wanted the rest of the film to explain what the note said, and not just the opening of the film.

https://prezi.com/view/gN1avUMvzTbKEe01lplY/ This is the link to my Creative Critical Reflection on my film "The Note". I used the website Prezi to create it. In the Prezi, I included pictures to go along with the text. I found pictures online, I used screenshots of scenes comparing my drafts and final product.

SCENE1 Car is turned off keys land on dashboard, NOAH dials "Mia lil sis" and calls her.   NOAH: (voicemail) Hey Mia, i'm here to pick you up, i'm in the north lot. More voice mails play over lapping each other, gets faster and more stressful but it suddenly stops. NOAH breathes sharply. He starts texting her. " Hey i'm here" "In the north lot" " C'mon" " dude" . NOAH calls her one more time, leaving one last message,   NOAH: " Moms gonna kill you if you miss your first therapist appointment, you know what, whatever i'm coming to get you " Noah wonders the school looking for his sister. he finds her walking the track and reflecting. NOAH: Mia!  MIA looks his way and sadly walks towards him. He hugs her, she doesn't hug back. NOAH: We have to go, why are you out here? MIA: Well, I've been skipping school and walking the track ever since he cheated on me, to reflect, think o...